Seraphus Posted December 24, 2017 Share Posted December 24, 2017 Hello everyone, here is my new song, I would love to get some feedback on it. Thanks and happy holidays to everyone :). Seraphus - Icarus 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted December 26, 2017 Share Posted December 26, 2017 Very serene. I really like it. There was a spot in the first couple phrases where the atmosphere of the piece changed due to your rhythm section. I would try to use that effect more often. When the first vocal part came in, the pedal i chord in your strings clouded the previously nicely swayed feeling of the chords from before. Maybe change the voices one by one to avoid this. I think all of your periods started with an F minor chord... it was a nice home key, but if, for example, you started on a VI∆7 chord, even once, it could really be a wonderful contrast. Best wishes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seraphus Posted December 26, 2017 Author Share Posted December 26, 2017 Thank you once again for the great insight :). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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