January 13, 20188 yr Hi there, I wanted to share with you this song that I wrote a few months ago. It's a song about Italy, a country dear to my heart :) To help you with the understanding, I added some subtitles that you need to start on youtube. I let you discover the song. Thank you all The lyrics : Sweetness invites us, Near Italy Life abandons us, In the heart of Verona A suspicion of Chianti, One or 2 martini Their flavor caresses us, Two spritz and we take off It is beautiful as a Prada at sale price as Pope Francis in gondola A moonlight swim in Capri Little Italy Those too strong voices which resound These vongole that we adore It is beautiful my Little Ita, Little Italy An old vespa , Lost in Lombardy An ice cream just the 2 of us , On the Lake Como At the end of a narrow street, A miracle fountain In a burning heat, Intriguing beautiful Roma It is beautiful as a Prada at sale price As Pope Francis in gondola A moonlight swim in Capri Little Italy Those too strong voices which resound These vongole that we adore It is beautiful my Little Ita, Little Italy Canals and alleys making noise Venice is packed An invaded lagoon Sinking beautiful Venice Spoken : I know you for a long time You run in my veins Your thousand colors streets I know them by heart I recognize all your perfumes I guess your flavors My second homeland,ma little Italy It is beautiful as a Prada at sale price As Pope Francis in gondola A moonlight swim in Capri Little Italy Those too strong voices which resound These vongole that we adore It is beautiful my Little Ita, Little Italy
January 21, 20188 yr Very nice. The percussion is excellent. Nice different sections. I'd like to hear your voice a bit louder, and a bit brighter to homogenize with the music. Don't be afraid to let you voice stand in the spotlight.. The ear will always ground itself with the human voice, as long as it's good. and your voice is good. regardless of how outstanding the music may be.. The music is excellent too
January 28, 20188 yr The use of dorian is pretty cool, especially since it's not consistent, but don't be afraid to use chord progressions that really highlight it. Nobody hates a #vi chord when used right. I wasn't a huge fan of the layering when you were saying "Little Italy" in the chorus, but the song is otherwise pretty stable.
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