November 24, 20187 yr Wrote this in a day about a year ago. It's nothing special but thought it was decent for my first composition. Edited November 24, 20187 yr by Clindner_78
November 25, 20187 yr Hi @Clindner_78 ! Nice & different melodies on piano. You can convert it to many versions (Ambient/ Chill out, Rock) or to keep it as it is... Nice try! nice piece!
March 23, 20196 yr A little bit hard to follow rhythmically. Adding something else in chords or counterpoint to take away from the power chord or parallel sound might have been welcome, especially in the beginning. When thirds are used, it's a little sparse sounding due to lack of proper upper support.
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