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I enjoyed this! If possible, could you post the score (it'll help us comment on specifics)? I think you did well with beginning the process of thickening a texture. I think what might help improve this piece would be taking a dense texture and exploring ways to reduce it, then add to it, reduce it etc. Moreover, I think that experimenting more with less regular rhythmic configurations will break a bit of the monotony that can begin to develop; pushing a little further will make it feel less like an exercise. Overall, I think you did a good job!

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I can tell you have a clear dramatic vision here, especially with a gradually thickening texture. I agree with Jared on being maybe more specific with what you want, sine a lot of the independent, counter-point-y sounding lines seem a little jarring atop everything in that register. Keep the intent, but maybe use a little more doubling and an expansion of pitch spaceĀ for effects too!

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