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My short original berceuse with melody

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As always, quite beautiful, Oscar!  My only complaint is that there are never scores to accompany these wonderful performances!

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Nice work, overall with a great melody. I would have loved to hear more in each key; I feel like the modulations may be a tad too frequent to get in a "berceuse" headspace, at least for me. The VI - I in G major also kind of took me out of it slightly. 

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6 hours ago, Monarcheon said:

Nice work, overall with a great melody. I would have loved to hear more in each key; I feel like the modulations may be a tad too frequent to get in a "berceuse" headspace, at least for me. The VI - I in G major also kind of took me out of it slightly. 

 

Yes, I think so too. If only once or twice, the deviation would give going back to the melody the comfort I think the composer is after. Because as you say, the melody is very nice. But it needs an opposition to prove it.

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