Jump to content

Recommended Posts

Here the first 47 bars of the first movement of my first symphony!

Allegro.mp3

 

Open for feedback and suggestions!

Edited by Hendrik Meniere
MP3
0:00
0:00
  • Like 2

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Sounds dramatic, brooding. The flute and harp part was a nice contrast to the heaviness.

One possible problem is that there's a lot of doubling on the instruments. You might want to add more harmony in there, or take away some instruments that are playing. Just a suggestion.

By the way, is there a score we can glance at?

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Thanks for your comment! 

23 hours ago, Tónskáld said:

One possible problem is that there's a lot of doubling on the instruments. You might want to add more harmony in there, or take away some instruments that are playing. Just a suggestion.

Yeah, I as well think there is to much doubling not giving the pice a more diverse texture. I'll try to add more harmony and take away some instruments. Thanks again for your feedback! 🙂 

23 hours ago, Tónskáld said:

By the way, is there a score we can glance at?

Yes there is, but right now I'm a bit ashamed of my orchestration skills 😅!! Maybe some day I will...

Thanks @Tónskáld for your comment!!!

Edited by Hendrik Meniere
  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.


×
×
  • Create New...