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Nocturne No.1 in A Flat Minor Op.1 "Blossom"

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So I just composed my first piece and I would be very grateful to receive feedback. Please don't mind the mistakes in the recording. (I literally recorded the piece right after I composed it so please cut me some slack) Also, I feel that I did something wrong in the sheet music. Please let me know I didn't do it right. Thank you.

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Your score... I feel a lot in 3/4, with the downbeat on the low notes. Is this notation a conscious decision? Like the beginning of a new phrase in the middle of m. 66 is baffling to me.

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Thank you so much for spotting that in measure 66! I'm really new to notation so I'm not very clear with this stuff. 😀

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Nice. Dramatic, but like low-key dramatic. The notation is a little odd for me. It's not terrible but I think the time signature should reflect the rhythmic pulse of the music. This would look and feel more natural in 3/4, like Monarcheon said. Other than that, nice work!

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