January 24, 20206 yr I’m thinking about entering a song writing contest but I can’t decide which of these two pieces to use. I think I’ve posted both of them here in the past for critiques, but now I just want to know which one I should use as an instrumental entry. Also, the titles; “Mental Suicide” and “I Don’t Want to Think” are really only working titles because of words that popped into my head as I was humming out the melodies, they can be changed. I’d like an opinion on that as well. Any feedback would be most appreciated. -Rick
January 24, 20206 yr This is very good. I think they both sound like instrumental tracks to songs by 'The Smiths'. I could almost hear Morrissey.
January 25, 20206 yr 1st one is too hapy to be called mental suicide, sounds like something that would be played on a church. If I had to choose one, I would go for the second ( I don't want to think)
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