January 24, 20206 yr Iโm thinking about entering a song writing contest butย I canโt decide which of these two pieces to use. I think Iโve posted both of them here in the past for critiques,ย but now I just want to know which one I should use as an instrumental entry. Also, the titles; โMental Suicideโ and โI Donโt Want to Thinkโ are really onlyย working titles because of words that poppedย into my head as Iย wasย humming out the melodies, they can be changed. Iโd like an opinion on that as well. Any feedback would be most appreciated. -Rick
January 24, 20206 yr This is very good.ย I think they both sound like instrumental tracks toย songs by 'The Smiths'.ย I could almost hear Morrissey.ย
January 25, 20206 yr 1st one is too hapy to be called mental suicide, sounds like something that would be played on a church. If I had to choose one, I would go for the second ( I don't want to think)
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