February 22, 20206 yr Lots of homophony; too much for me. Distinct voices would be nice. Also, all your key changes are unnecessary. Just make it an un-keyed score.
February 22, 20206 yr 3 hours ago, Monarcheon said: Lots of homophony; too much for me. Distinct voices would be nice. Also, all your key changes are unnecessary. Just make it an un-keyed score. EXACTLY what @Monarcheon wrote. This piece desperately needs some counterpoint.
February 22, 20206 yr Author 19 hours ago, maestrowick said: EXACTLY what @Monarcheon wrote. This piece desperately needs some counterpoint. Completely true. Thank you for your input, both of you.
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.