Fruisen Posted June 7, 2020 Share Posted June 7, 2020 (edited) Hi again! I wrote this piece for fun after attending a horse race. Thank you for listening if you do! 馃檪 Edited June 7, 2020 by Fruisen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bradley Scarff Posted June 9, 2020 Share Posted June 9, 2020 Very nice piece! I can see the inspiration horse racing may give to it as well. If you ever revisit this piece I personally would have put a more lyrical section in the middle where there can still be the recurring motif in the bass but over a pleasant melodic line. though that is just my opinion.聽 聽 Also are you categorising this piece as A major or D major? the video and title of the post conflict. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T贸nsk谩ld Posted June 9, 2020 Share Posted June 9, 2020 (edited) What a fun piece!!! I don't know how I missed it when you posted it on Sunday. It's very lyrical and captivating, especially with the chromaticism and colorful chord progressions. Fine work! I will echo what @Bradley Scarff聽says... I think a short interlude with the melody in the bass/left hand would be very tasteful. But fantastic job nonetheless! Edited June 9, 2020 by T贸nsk谩ld 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fruisen Posted June 10, 2020 Author Share Posted June 10, 2020 Thank you @Bradley Scarff聽and @T贸nsk谩ld聽that鈥檚 very kind of you! The piece is in D Major not A聽I made a very silly typo, but when I聽revise the piece I聽will definitely take your suggestions into account. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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