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Serene || Violin Solo

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Thanks for listening, and I hope you enjoy.

 

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Was written and performed by me. Comments of advice and criticism are appreciated.

Also, if anyone could give me advice on how to get a better sound from home, let me know.

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First, it's a bit pitchy. Second, solo violin goes a long way with reverb, which would massively help for this "relaxing" genre you're going for. Might be worth observing your registral treatment and opting for some compound melody... the Baroque definitely knew how to write slow stuff.

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good performance. there are good ideas but you lose them with repetitive arpeggio and chromatic advances. in general, it will be more melodic if you base your theme on certain ideas. it looks more like  etude this way, but it can be improved.  

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@Monarcheon Thanks for the advice/criticism and for listening, I appreciate it. I'll be researching/experimenting with compound melodies when I add more instruments in the future, and will also experiment with some reverb

Thanks again

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@ClasiCompose Thanks for the advice/criticism and for listening as well, much appreciated. I agree that it felt repetitive, and posted it hoping for some feedback/ideas on how to expand in the future, which you gave.

Thanks again

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