June 29, 20205 yr Author Was written and performed by me. Comments of advice and criticism are appreciated. Also, if anyone could give me advice on how to get a better sound from home, let me know.
June 29, 20205 yr First, it's a bit pitchy. Second, solo violin goes a long way with reverb, which would massively help for this "relaxing" genre you're going for. Might be worth observing your registral treatment and opting for some compound melody... the Baroque definitely knew how to write slow stuff.
June 29, 20205 yr good performance. there are good ideas but you lose them with repetitive arpeggio and chromatic advances. in general, it will be more melodic if you base your theme on certain ideas. it looks more like etude this way, but it can be improved.
June 30, 20205 yr Author @Monarcheon Thanks for the advice/criticism and for listening, I appreciate it. I'll be researching/experimenting with compound melodies when I add more instruments in the future, and will also experiment with some reverb Thanks again Edited June 30, 20205 yr by Sun
June 30, 20205 yr Author @ClasiCompose Thanks for the advice/criticism and for listening as well, much appreciated. I agree that it felt repetitive, and posted it hoping for some feedback/ideas on how to expand in the future, which you gave. Thanks again Edited June 30, 20205 yr by Sun
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