TheCluelessClariney Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 I've been trying to experiment more with different rhythms and chords and things but is this just bad? Or is it inventive or what like help I don't know. https://musescore.com/user/30353801/scores/6260670 Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan1791 Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 (edited) I think first you should try to compose a relatively simple piece with jazz harmony and try to create melodies as natural as possible. What you created seems to be somewhat consistent but it doesn't work for me, anyway good try and keep trying new stuff. Edited August 13, 2020 by Ivan1791 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 Well, the "problem" here is, although it's short, it seems to have not a structure. It's like always going forward. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arrogant Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 (edited) ^ This and very inconsistent tempo is very offputting! Melodies on the other hand sound fine. Edited August 13, 2020 by Arrogant 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCluelessClariney Posted August 14, 2020 Author Share Posted August 14, 2020 Thank you everyone for the feedback!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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