David_DLM Posted October 27, 2020 Share Posted October 27, 2020 (edited) I wanted to dedicate a piece to a loved one, so I composed a waltz in piano. Then I met with an orchestra composer to help me orchestrate it. Please, I would love feedback from this community. It is full of people who can give me their PoV and tell me for example "Trumpets louder would sound better in this part; or make this section softer". It is composed of 4 waltzes. The pattern is: 1) D Major; 2) G Major; 3) D Major; 4) G Major; Coda) D Major Thank you so much! Edited October 27, 2020 by David_DLM From MP3 file to YouTube link 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quinn Posted October 28, 2020 Share Posted October 28, 2020 Little to say about this. Nice. Easy to listen to, the tune and harmonic progressions are all good, so's the scoring and balance, although I felt the bass was a little heavy. A good choice of instruments and doubling taking up the tune. Well done. An accomplished piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David_DLM Posted October 28, 2020 Author Share Posted October 28, 2020 8 hours ago, Quinn said: Little to say about this. Nice. Easy to listen to, the tune and harmonic progressions are all good, so's the scoring and balance, although I felt the bass was a little heavy. A good choice of instruments and doubling taking up the tune. Well done. An accomplished piece. Thank you! I'll take it off a bit (the bass). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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