Aditya Hirey Posted November 3, 2020 Share Posted November 3, 2020 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AyIq_apZTZc&feature=youtu.be Aditya's new tune composition for review, not sure how to convert it to notes in pdf files 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olov Posted November 25, 2020 Share Posted November 25, 2020 (edited) Beautiful and with nice texture, especially with the bass lines, and the melody completes the bass line well in the texture, nice playing. Good articulation. Although some of the chords or notes doesn't fit in, for example 00:59, 01:07, 01:33 (pedal?), 01:44-01:47 - in modernistic music it could work but not within this style. It's also better to begin the piece with a tonic, in my opinon. Aditya is very talented. Keep it up! Edited November 25, 2020 by Olov 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aditya Hirey Posted November 26, 2020 Author Share Posted November 26, 2020 12 hours ago, Olov said: Beautiful and with nice texture, especially with the bass lines, and the melody completes the bass line well in the texture, nice playing. Good articulation. Although some of the chords or notes doesn't fit in, for example 00:59, 01:07, 01:33 (pedal?), 01:44-01:47 - in modernistic music it could work but not within this style. It's also better to begin the piece with a tonic, in my opinon. Aditya is very talented. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aditya Hirey Posted November 26, 2020 Author Share Posted November 26, 2020 Thanks Olov for your detailed analysis, will pass on your comments to Aditya. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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