J.Santos Posted December 17, 2020 Share Posted December 17, 2020 (edited) Hi! Been another long time! Here I bring you my first (I think myself) decent invention I've ever made. Hope you like it! Edited December 18, 2020 by J.Santos 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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PeterthePapercomPoser Posted December 18, 2020 Share Posted December 18, 2020 This is a nice invention! Although you don't include dominant-level instances of your motive in the exposition. Your invention is quite unusual in that it doesn't seem to contain any middle entries of the motive. Instead, you seem to lead from one episode to another. Your first episode touches on B minor and C major. Then your next, more sequential episode (and more extensive) touches on A minor and D minor. Overall this was quite enjoyable! Thanks for sharing. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J.Santos Posted December 19, 2020 Author Share Posted December 19, 2020 12 hours ago, PaperComposer said: This is a nice invention! Although you don't include dominant-level instances of your motive in the exposition. Your invention is quite unusual in that it doesn't seem to contain any middle entries of the motive. Instead, you seem to lead from one episode to another. Your first episode touches on B minor and C major. Then your next, more sequential episode (and more extensive) touches on A minor and D minor. Overall this was quite enjoyable! Thanks for sharing. Thanks! I will take in mind twhat you told me for the next one I do! Thanks a lot for your words! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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