Guillem82 Posted January 3, 2021 Share Posted January 3, 2021 Hi, here the result of my first Christmas and New Year in Germany. I appreciate your comments! MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Kalte Länder > next PDF Kalte Länder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted January 5, 2021 Share Posted January 5, 2021 I liked the crescendos which brought more life to the music I thought. On the whole I felt like you overused your main melodic motif that you introduced in the very beginning. You also use sequencing and scalar motion quite copiously - when you introduce some figurations with larger leaps it's a welcome change. I guess it's a very sweet kind of piece I just don't think there's much in it to surprise the listener. It doesn't really do anything unexpected I felt like. Although the result was still enjoyable. Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guillem82 Posted January 8, 2021 Author Share Posted January 8, 2021 Thanks for your comments! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Markus Boyd Posted January 10, 2021 Share Posted January 10, 2021 Hi Gulliem, long time no speak. I concur with Papercomposer, though this is nonetheless a great effort. Much of your ideas center on the the romanesca and prinner schema. I think you need to be clear with what the purpose of this piece is. What is your reason for entitling the piece Kalte Länder? This translates to "Cold Countries" as per google. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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