JohnKiunke Posted February 7, 2021 Share Posted February 7, 2021 Another very short fugue I wrote after working through IJzerman's "Harmony, Counterpoint, Partimento", this one's in a kind of stile antico (the longer note values and more vocal style). MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Fuga a 3 in A-flat major > next PDF Fuga a 3 a flat major Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BritishCompositeur Posted February 7, 2021 Share Posted February 7, 2021 Very nice! Just a couple of points really: the oboe at the bottom of its range would be too clangy in comparison to the flute, which isn't that high in its range throughout. Perhaps a cor anglais instead, or simply a trio of reeds: oboe, cor anglais, and bassoon? The ending feels slighlty incomplete to me, since I expect it to resolve to Db major - the Ab in the bassoon resembles a dominant pedal instead of a tonic pedal to me, probably because of all the Gbs (with the sole G natural implying V/V to me). Otherwise, great job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Markus Boyd Posted February 9, 2021 Share Posted February 9, 2021 Great job and welcome to the forum. Glad to see activity on partimenti here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maestrowick Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 I would make this a 4 part if you can. Also, try to add more diminution so you can have more push in this fugue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 Your ending sounds like a half-cadence probably because of the Gb in the oboe near the end. To counteract that you could maybe get rid of that Gb and replace it with a G natural or end on a Db major chord after a short pause after your current last measure. That wouldn't be very traditional of your fugue to do that but it's a common macro-tonal scheme to have the keys of a piece roughly follow the format of an authentic cadence. Overall I think this is a pretty cool fugue although I wish you had a middle entry of the subject in a key other than the tonic or dominant although I like how you invert the subject in the second half. Your developmental episodes are also pretty well conceived and satisfyingly chromatic! Great job although I wish this were longer and you could bring more individuality to the construction of your subject. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnKiunke Posted August 27, 2021 Author Share Posted August 27, 2021 Thank you all for your comments! I wrote this one along with the other I posted here more to see if I could write a fugue at all, hopefully I'll be back with more expanded and original stuff. Your criticism is greatly appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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