Guardian25 Posted August 24, 2021 Share Posted August 24, 2021 (edited) Here is an invention for wind trio in G major. Any feedback on the piece is welcomed! Edited August 25, 2021 by Guardian25 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Invention 2 for wind trio in G > next PDF Invention 2 for wind trio in G Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted August 25, 2021 Share Posted August 25, 2021 It is a nice invention with clearly recognizable rhythms that make for catchy motifs. I think you might have a mistake in measure 28 where the clarinet has a G natural at the same time as the flute has a G#. Great job overall! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted August 25, 2021 Share Posted August 25, 2021 NIce work. I only would have need some pause during the piece. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guardian25 Posted August 25, 2021 Author Share Posted August 25, 2021 20 hours ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said: It is a nice invention with clearly recognizable rhythms that make for catchy motifs. I think you might have a mistake in measure 28 where the clarinet has a G natural at the same time as the flute has a G#. Great job overall! Thanks for the comment! I have edited this mistake! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guardian25 Posted August 25, 2021 Author Share Posted August 25, 2021 4 hours ago, Luis Hernández said: NIce work. I only would have need some pause during the piece. I will make note of that! To include more pauses in my ideas, I tend to not pause and I think that adding pauses would help my ideas breath a bit more! I will try to incorporate this idea in my piece! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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