Blessed Ignorance

I thought I could start with this. Not the brightest star in the sky, but I'd like to know what you think.

Impressions, suggestions? Do you love it, do you hate it? Why? The simplicity is intentional, have you ever heard of ignorance which wasn't simple? Or blessed, for that matter? ;) Oh, and please don't set your midi device to GS Wavetable SW Synth. It's horrid, at least with the violin. Cheers!

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I really enjoyed the song, it's melodies are beautiful, and there is a lot of emotion to it. I really don't see how someone can dislike it (it would be like kicking a puppy). I LOVED the middle part, but a is small remak if i may though - at 1:58 there was a really "hard" passage from violin solo to piano only, and kinda too sudden for the gentile mood of the song. The ending was..... well the strangest one i heard recently! but it really gives the topic of the song a valid description, if you know what i mean.... ;) :P

Lovely piece really lovely. At some points I believe a better harmony could have been achieved, and the ending could have been better. I have a feeling you can do something better than 2 repeating notes that fade!

Thanks to both of you, I thought someone would mention harmony. I'm about to study a lot more about it, so hopefully this will show in the quality of my pieces in the future. And the ending... Have you ever heard of that dreaded phrase "writer's block"? I didn't know what to do, so I did what I did, and I'm not particularly proud of it. I think I could think of a better ending now, though. I'll work on it over the weekend. Ok, thanks again, and any other comments are still welcome. Cheers!

Please excuse the last post, while I meant everything I said, I might not have phrased it correctly...Hmmm..."I think I could think"....It's been a long day. :P