'Song' for organ

Wrote this a while back. Is this playable? These chords?

I like this ver much. I think the chords are playable.

But I have two observations:

- Using the pedal line all the time gives no chance to bring it for accentuation or particular parts.

- I don't think it's very idiomatic (for organ) to have those heavy chords in the left hand a a single melodic line in the other (as if it were a flute).

On 3/21/2022 at 8:32 PM, Luis Hernández said:

I like this ver much. I think the chords are playable.

But I have two observations:

- Using the pedal line all the time gives no chance to bring it for accentuation or particular parts.

- I don't think it's very idiomatic (for organ) to have those heavy chords in the left hand a a single melodic line in the other (as if it were a flute).

 

Thank you for your comment! Yes it isn't idiomatic... I go check with an organist here what kind of organpipes would fit best. I might write the right hand a octave lower but ascribe a high pipe for it. But first write more movements... I will post another one later in a new tread. Agreed about the pedal line, but it is kind of the idea: an eternal stream beneath and a melody above. Maybe people can like because it is not idiomatic? Its own thing?