Gyugcac Posted April 19, 2022 Share Posted April 19, 2022 (edited) , Edited August 10, 2022 by Gyugcac Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted June 1, 2022 Share Posted June 1, 2022 It's a nice inventive piece. Because of your liberal use of scales without any kind of hook or turn to create a more interesting motif, it comes off a little bit like a scale exercise. It's very rhythmically square too and the tempo change near at the end sounds very artificial. You do create some harmonic and melodic interest with your use of the minor subdominant though, so good job there. Thanks for sharing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted June 2, 2022 Share Posted June 2, 2022 The best is the contrary motion. I think you were careful with this. But with proper motivic manipulation it would be much better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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