JupiterSwears Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 I am interested to hear any feedback on one of my piano solo improvisations inspired by Nocturnes: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted June 14, 2022 Share Posted June 14, 2022 Despite your use of the line cliché it still sounds quite fresh. Your voicings are crisp. It's just a shame that it's so short. I guess if you overstayed your welcome with these standard progression it might start to sound too repetitive after a while. But it has quite a nostalgic feel and it reminds me of some of my favorite VGM tracks that I know and love. It's definitely got heart. Thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jean Szulc Posted June 15, 2022 Share Posted June 15, 2022 I agree with @PeterthePapercomPoser on all his remarks. If I could add one little thing, I think the music could benefit from a bit more space in the melodic line. There are a lot of moments in which you have at least one note on each beat non-stop. This is not wrong, but diversity is always good and can make for a more effective line. Good job nonetheless. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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