hw1234 Posted September 21, 2022 Share Posted September 21, 2022 Composed this in 15 minutes looking for feedback thanks MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu s20 > next PDF s20 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omicronrg9 Posted September 22, 2022 Share Posted September 22, 2022 Are you looking for some specific feedback about the orchestration, notation for some instruments or something like this, or do you want a plain opinion without much depth? I'm afraid my experience in orchestration and composing for orchestra is still very limited so I cannot be of much help there (other people here surely can). Regarding the piece as-is, it's good. I specially like the timpani and I don't really see anything that didn't convince me. It's a short, simple and solid piece. Congrats! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brandon S Posted September 23, 2022 Share Posted September 23, 2022 Very effective use of the instruments. You played to all of their strong suits. I would maybe explore with your chords and see if you can produce something more melodically and harmonically interesting than bouncing between I V and IV with the occasional borrowed dominants. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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