hw1234 Posted December 17, 2022 Share Posted December 17, 2022 (edited) Here is my most recent score in c major Edited December 17, 2022 by hw1234 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Piano_score_284 (1) > next PDF Piano_score_284 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hw1234 Posted December 17, 2022 Author Share Posted December 17, 2022 Piano score 285 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Piano_285 (2) > next PDF Piano_285 (1) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted December 17, 2022 Share Posted December 17, 2022 1 hour ago, hw1234 said: Here is my most recent score in c major For piano 284: I feel like it's more in F major! The beginning C major acts more like the dominant preparation of F major. That's why I find the B natural in b.18 somewhat strange. But it's definitely a great beginning to be developed! It's light-hearted and classical for me. For piano 285: There are many tone clushes and false relation in this one. Is that your intended sound? I find bar 11-13 really dissonant, but the dissonance can create a humorous effect if used repeatedly! Henry 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted December 17, 2022 Share Posted December 17, 2022 284 I agree it is in F maj. It has some catchy sound. 285The super-tonal (with no extensions) background of this piece makes it difficult to assume what happens in measure 13. I can buy measure 3 thinking it's an Am9 chord. But in m. 13 theres no sense the melody with the chord, nor the resolution of eh C#. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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