January 31, 20233 yr This is nicely simple but what is more important is that the writing is not very idiomatic for the piano. This is something you learn with time.
February 1, 20233 yr Hi @hw1234, I agree with Luis comment. You can probably use thicker chords of piano to write idiomatically and harmonically satisfying, e.g. in b.4, 8, 16 and 19 the cadential effect will be much better if it's full chord! You can try to play this if you know how to play piano, or at least listen to some piano pieces to help you know the potential of piano writing! Also these are all good materials for development, and you should work it out for a longer movement! Henry
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