hw1234 Posted February 1, 2023 Share Posted February 1, 2023 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu duet_3 > next PDF duet_3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted February 1, 2023 Share Posted February 1, 2023 The opening sentence has good presentation and continuation, and the modulation to C major reasonable, but the 7 bar structure puts me off a little bit! The triplets provide good contrast but quite unrelatef to the previous bars. The ending on F major is too sudden without enough preparation. You should modulate to it with more preparation! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted February 1, 2023 Share Posted February 1, 2023 Except for the two last bars, an oboe would fit better with that register. It is interesting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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