February 1, 20233 yr The opening sentence has good presentation and continuation, and the modulation to C major reasonable, but the 7 bar structure puts me off a little bit! The triplets provide good contrast but quite unrelatef to the previous bars. The ending on F major is too sudden without enough preparation. You should modulate to it with more preparation! Henry
February 1, 20233 yr Except for the two last bars, an oboe would fit better with that register. It is interesting.
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