hw1234 Posted February 21, 2023 Share Posted February 21, 2023 (edited) Me Dirty d brane enjoyed composing this score Edited February 21, 2023 by hw1234 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu bfd1.custom_score > next PDF bfd1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted February 21, 2023 Share Posted February 21, 2023 Hi @hw1234, I love b.1-8 the first part more as there are more varieties. B.9-11 for me is quite elementary as it's just the extension of the ending tonic chord. Again you should try develop more at least in the level in the piece 292 and here it's not even long enough for a sketch for me, maybe it's just jotting down idea here for later usage. You have so many ideas that can be extended! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted February 23, 2023 Share Posted February 23, 2023 Yes, the problem here is that the second part has not harmonic movement and, for that reason, there is no cadence. Bars 9 and then are a second inversion of the tonic (Dmaj), which is predominant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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