May 14, 20232 yr for bars 11 and 15, do you want the second half of those bars to follow the next bar similarly i.e. left hand off beat strumming? I think that would keep the piece's momentum going. The harmonics to me does sound a bit strange for this classical style, but let's see what others think.
May 14, 20232 yr Although it sounds like an early classical style, it has some elements that are out of place. For example those thick chords under a thin melody line. It sounds good but the harmony is basic and could do with some surprising harmonic moments.
May 14, 20232 yr I hope you don't mind but I took a closer look at the beginning of your piece, which I really like btw, and I jotted down an alternative that's perhaps more in style. I then improvised a little at the end to round it off. I play at a slower speed than you intended for your piece but it would work at either pace.
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