August 25, 20232 yr Hi all ... Here's a new piano work. All comments welcome as always. Mark Edited August 26, 20232 yr by MJFOBOE
August 28, 20232 yr I quite like the rhythmic ostinato in the background that serves as an arc for the development of the right hand. It seems to me a very lyrical piece.
August 29, 20232 yr Hi Mark @MJFOBOE, I quite enjoy those ostinatos and your harmonies as usal. Just beware of the ninths and tenths since it can be unplayable by pianists with small hands, so maybe arpeggios with a parenthesis can be added there. I can play those chords though. Henry
September 1, 20232 yr Heya! Really like the texture and harmony here. This really gives me this gloomy and somewhat nostalgic feeling? Reminds me of the OST of an RPG called "One Shot" that I admire. As the others has pointed out, I love that you switched the ostinato to the right hand in the middle part, gives the left hand a spotlight for development material. Anyways, nice piece!
October 7, 20232 yr Nice job! Throughout the piece I was under the impression that most of the time the accidentals would have been better displayed as sharps with perhaps the exception of bar 21 - the Eb should definitely be spelled as a flat. But everywhere else from what I can tell - it would be more logical for the chromatics to be spelled as sharps imo. This is quite a dreary atmosphere you paint - does it have anything to do with autumn? Thanks for sharing.
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