semotivo Posted October 12, 2023 Share Posted October 12, 2023 Hi! this is invention for two instruments. The first voice melody is nice, but second voice could be better. It sounds now confusing. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu invention > next PDF invention Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted October 13, 2023 Share Posted October 13, 2023 Hello @semotivo, I think the counterpoint suffers from parallel octave sometimes, for example b.3, 5-6, 10, 18 and other places, or a parallel 5th in b.11-12, and these will weaken the independence of the counterpoint in your invention especially a two part one. The voice leading is sometimes not fluent enough, for example in b.17-18. It sounds indeed confusing to me sometimes. Thx for sharing! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Markus Boyd Posted November 5, 2023 Share Posted November 5, 2023 I don't think you are ready for invention writing. The ideas and harmonic decisions here are unusual and not consistent with the music context from which 'inventions' are derived. Keep trying Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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