October 12, 20232 yr Hi! this is invention for two instruments. The first voice melody is nice, but second voice could be better. It sounds now confusing.
October 13, 20232 yr Hello @semotivo, I think the counterpoint suffers from parallel octave sometimes, for example b.3, 5-6, 10, 18 and other places, or a parallel 5th in b.11-12, and these will weaken the independence of the counterpoint in your invention especially a two part one. The voice leading is sometimes not fluent enough, for example in b.17-18. It sounds indeed confusing to me sometimes. Thx for sharing! Henry
November 5, 20232 yr I don't think you are ready for invention writing. The ideas and harmonic decisions here are unusual and not consistent with the music context from which 'inventions' are derived. Keep trying
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