Cafebabe Posted March 11 Share Posted March 11 (edited) Any feedback/tip will be useful midi_piano_miniature.mid Edited March 11 by Cafebabe MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu piano_miniature > next PDF piano_miniature Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted March 12 Share Posted March 12 Hi @Cafebabe and welcome to the forum! This is a very quirky and unique piece! Some parts of it remind me of Mozart, others Scarlatti. You have some quite adventurous modulations in this! Some of your harmonic choices take some getting used to and I find the retransition back to the main theme in meas. 16 - 17 lacking (you just stop one section in C minor and suddenly return to the main theme in D major - quite distant if you consider Riemann!) I would definitely call this a sonatina in development! But in order for it to be fully fleshed out you really should fashion better transitions between each of your phrases. There are also some awkward enharmonic spellings such as the B# diminished chord in meas. 10, 3rd & 4th beat. As it is the piece is definitely succinct and action packed, erring rather on the side of variety rather than unity in that precarious balance that all composers must strike. It's enjoyable as is although I feel like if you put some more work into it, it could really be a much more consequential piece. Or you could keep writing short pieces like this, learn from each experience and develop your craft that way. Thanks for sharing! Peter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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