March of the dead Trumpeter

I finished this last week. It is my first Atonal piece. The trumpet playes the melody. the accompaniament is based on staced thirds. In live performanse there are are places were the pianist is instracted to play on the strings.

March of the dead trumpeter_Final.MID

here is the score.

March of the dead trumpeter_Final.MUS

I liked it. Very atonal. You did a very nice job. I can't really can't comment on anything to improve upon except for a few things regarding tonality.

I think it is too tonal... There needs to be more dissonace to make the piece sound more deathly. The piece is also very major... it could be a little more minor. Overall, good work!

I like the mix between tonal and Atonal. Also there is a quite nice melody in it aswell. The piano seems to be doing all the atonal stuff. It is quite a funny piece to listen to, nice, because the atonalness, there isn't much to improve on. Some of the chords that are very dissonant, I liked. Also, there could be more minor like morivou said, and more augmented chords too, I like them :P.

thank you guys.

I tried to give the trumpet a nice melodical line to move on and then give in sime spices with the piano. the piece is writen around an "a" centricity.