Dance in D major

Any and all feedback is appreciated, including if there’s a more appropriate title than “dance”.

The performance is automated with the Flat app

Hey there

I really like this! It reminds me of Mario 3 for some reason 😄 I like the catchy ideas with rhythm and melody, but it sounds like this is the start to something rather than being a completed piece. You have cool ideas over the static 5/4, but I think the music was ready to move on harmonically. I would explore your rhythm on the V chord (A) or somewhere else and see where that leads your melody writing. You've also set yourself up with some motivic elements, as your theme could be expanded and tweaked. Great start, I'd love to see where this piece goes if you decide to elaborate your ideas. 

Well done! 

Hello @Alant!

Like @Thatguy v2.0said I like the 5/4 waltz, not very commonly found as in the 2nd mov of Tchaikovsky’s Pathetique. I agree with him too you can develop the piece to a longer one. I love the time signature changes you make after the opening bars! The C natural in b.11 gives a mixolydian feeling which I like as well

Beware of those F naturals, as they should be written as E sharps since they resolve upward as a lower chromatic auxilary to F sharp. Thx for sharing!

Henry

Hi @Alant!

Hi!  For some reason, even though this is not a rag, it reminds me of The Spinach Rag from Final Fantasy VI.  This has a very unique approach to both harmony and rhythm which gives it a very individualized, custom feel that's not found in many others works.  But in it's current form, I think it is more like an experiment/idea rather than a finished piece.  Have you thought of adding a slow section in the middle to create a ternary form?  It would be interesting what kind of fun meters and rhythms you could come up with in a slow, lyrical contrasting section!  Thanks for sharing!