EnriqueMZ Posted June 29 Posted June 29 Hello!! Today I would like to share my first prelude 😄 Hope you like it. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Preludio No.1 > next PDF Preludio No.1 Quote
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted July 1 Posted July 1 Hi @EnriqueMZ! Nice March! Maybe for me I would vary the rhythm a bit at the latter half, or change the accompaniment for bars after b.17 to dotted rhythm as well for a more exciting mood. Thx for sharing! Henry 1 Quote
Luis Hernández Posted 12 hours ago Posted 12 hours ago Sounds good. But here are a few observations: In my opinion, there is little use of inverted chords. So much movement of the bass in root notes is very strict and not very melodious (it is not in keeping with the counterpoint style). There are some strange twists in some modulations. In measure 7 you have Bm - E.... and then Gm!! It's true that Gm - C - modulates to F. But that jump from E to Gm is harsh in this context. Something similar happens in bar 11: F - Em(b5) -- F# (b5) - B... to go to Em. These are progressions that appear with sudden changes and make it sound very strange. I'm not saying that this can't be written, but in this absolutely tonal context, I think it's out of style. If you do this in a contemporary language, it could work.  Quote
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