piano solo Op.60 1st mvt

Would be very interesting to see the score!

I am not sure whether you are looking for critique or not so I'll keep mine short and open to interpretation: I feel that the piece has a lot of potential but doesn't develop, merge or play with ideas for as long as I as a listener would want. You have good ideas, now the work is to look at the thing as a whole and tie them together.

But that's just my view. I really am a big fan of pieces that have long developments that still feel interesting. That being said, Rite of Spring is my favourite piece but... 

Best wishes from Finland,

Pyry

32 minutes ago, PaavolaPyry said:

Would be very interesting to see the score!

I am not sure whether you are looking for critique or not so I'll keep mine short and open to interpretation: I feel that the piece has a lot of potential but doesn't develop, merge or play with ideas for as long as I as a listener would want. You have good ideas, now the work is to look at the thing as a whole and tie them together.

 

But that's just my view. I really am a big fan of pieces that have long developments that still feel interesting. That being said, Rite of Spring is my favourite piece but... 

 

Best wishes from Finland,

Pyry

 

Hello there Pyry,

I appreciate your comment and I like that you are giving your opinion in such a peaceful way, unfortunately the score for this composition as for some others is lost and as it is finished I didn't have a reason to make it again and it is not an easy thing to do actually, I had kind of the same opinion from one friend that I had who plays the piano and composes also, and I will agree with you at some point as I did with him and with myself, I hate my music more than anyone but I also like my music more than anyone and I'm listening to it like a drug addict and I always want more from me so I know exactly what are you talking about and thank you for mentioning it with honesty.

Best wishes from Greece,

Demertzis

2 minutes ago, Demertzis said:

Hello there Pyry,

I appreciate your comment and I like that you are giving your opinion in such a peaceful way, unfortunately the score for this composition as for some others is lost and as it is finished I didn't have a reason to make it again and it is not an easy thing to do actually, I had kind of the same opinion from one friend that I had who plays the piano and composes also, and I will agree with you at some point as I did with him and with myself, I hate my music more than anyone but I also like my music more than anyone and I'm listening to it like a drug addict and I always want more from me so I know exactly what are you talking about and thank you for mentioning it with honesty.

Best wishes from Greece,

Demertzis

 

Hia, thank you for the answer. And I completely understand and relate. It is a shame about the score. But yeah, passion is what keeps the ball rolling, I applaud you for that. In case I forgot to mention it, I still liked the piece!

Keep on going, I might check some of your other posts in the near future.

Good night! 😄

4 minutes ago, PaavolaPyry said:

Hia, thank you for the answer. And I completely understand and relate. It is a shame about the score. But yeah, passion is what keeps the ball rolling, I applaud you for that. In case I forgot to mention it, I still liked the piece!

Keep on going, I might check some of your other posts in the near future.

Good night! 😄

 

Thank you very much Pyry! 

Have a good evening!