A hollow theme for Halloween (Fall 2025 competition)

A 4:30 piece I made in online sequencer in G#. link to behind the scenes: https://onlinesequencer.net/4928420

I hope I at least get a 7.5 average rating

Hello there @therealAJGS

Entry: A hallow theme for 

Average Score: 7

Review:

Melodies Themes Motives (6.5): 

I feel there are too repetieve. 

Harmony Chords Textures(8):

As for textures, you have interesting textures.  They interreact well each other. 

Form Development Structure Time(6):

I feel this piece is rather repetitive.  I do not know what the general form is.  

Score Presentation(1): 

Thank you providing the score. However, is needs polished.  I do not what parts on the two trebles staff represent each instrument.  

Instrumentation Orchestration Playability(5.5):

Again, with out a proper score, I not be tell playable it is.   Having said that, the instrumentation is rather interesting. 

Taste(8):

For taste: and 8 is correct. 

Next time; please provide us a score! 

I don't know how to write a score and all the AI ones cost money

14 minutes ago, therealAJGS said:

I don't know how to write a score and all the AI ones cost money

 

then learn. it is actually quite simple.

15 minutes ago, TristanTheTristan said:

then learn. it is actually quite simple.

so your saying you want me to learn in 5 days.

7 minutes ago, therealAJGS said:

so your saying you want me to learn in 5 days.

 

why 5 days? 

Also, I could give you classes on music theory and these stuff on private chat too. Anyways, I am just going to say, try to write notation next time!

here it is:

2 minutes ago, therealAJGS said:

here it is:

 

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thanks!

5 minutes ago, TristanTheTristan said:

why 5 days? 

that's the deadline for judging, and I want to add a score before then.

6 minutes ago, TristanTheTristan said:

Also, I could give you classes on music theory and these stuff on private chat too. Anyways, I am just going to say, try to write notation next time!

yeah, I've been  considering learning music theory because about half of the people on Youtube say you either need to know it, or don't have to know it.

@therealAJGS: you can learn after this.  

Any one here, can help with theory, form, and etc. 🙂