A hollow theme for Halloween (Fall 2025 competition)

A 4:30 piece I made in online sequencer in G#. link to behind the scenes: https://onlinesequencer.net/4928420

I hope I at least get a 7.5 average rating

Hello there @therealAJGS

Entry: A hallow theme for 

Average Score: 7

Review:

Melodies Themes Motives (6.5): 

I feel there are too repetieve. 

Harmony Chords Textures(8):

As for textures, you have interesting textures.  They interreact well each other. 

Form Development Structure Time(6):

I feel this piece is rather repetitive.  I do not know what the general form is.  

Score Presentation(1): 

Thank you providing the score. However, is needs polished.  I do not what parts on the two trebles staff represent each instrument.  

Instrumentation Orchestration Playability(5.5):

Again, with out a proper score, I not be tell playable it is.   Having said that, the instrumentation is rather interesting. 

Taste(8):

For taste: and 8 is correct. 

Next time; please provide us a score! 

I don't know how to write a score and all the AI ones cost money

14 minutes ago, therealAJGS said:

I don't know how to write a score and all the AI ones cost money

 

then learn. it is actually quite simple.

15 minutes ago, TristanTheTristan said:

then learn. it is actually quite simple.

so your saying you want me to learn in 5 days.

7 minutes ago, therealAJGS said:

so your saying you want me to learn in 5 days.

 

why 5 days? 

Also, I could give you classes on music theory and these stuff on private chat too. Anyways, I am just going to say, try to write notation next time!

here it is:

2 minutes ago, therealAJGS said:

here it is:

 

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thanks!

5 minutes ago, TristanTheTristan said:

why 5 days? 

that's the deadline for judging, and I want to add a score before then.

6 minutes ago, TristanTheTristan said:

Also, I could give you classes on music theory and these stuff on private chat too. Anyways, I am just going to say, try to write notation next time!

yeah, I've been  considering learning music theory because about half of the people on Youtube say you either need to know it, or don't have to know it.

@therealAJGS: you can learn after this.  

Any one here, can help with theory, form, and etc. 🙂 

13 hours ago, therealAJGS said:

that's the deadline for judging, and I want to add a score before then.

 

yeah, I've been  considering learning music theory because about half of the people on Youtube say you either need to know it, or don't have to know it.

 

It depends on your goal. Your intuition allowed you to make a piece of music that a normal person would say sounds fine/ cool.

For a more refined level, you can take that intuition and apply things like chords or melody structure. All of which will allow you to replicate your work more consistently versus "doing so because music theory is essential for writing good music". If you want a free, collegiate-level, link to start learning music theory, consider checking out Music Theory for the 2st Century Classroom. 

This site is the one I used as a Freshman and Sophomore. It's pages of music fundamentals to complex theory; it is also paired with exercises and worksheets for when you want to practice these skills.

Hi TherealAJGS.

Nice drrrrumset! 

It needs a bit (or a lot, depending on how tolerant your ears be) of production cause there are parts where the sounds turns into a wall and it gets perhaps too muddy —Maybe that's your thing, though—.  There's little dynamic shift apart from the one belonging to the instruments being present or silent into the piece which BTW, there are prolly more than five, right? I won't consider the score, I just took a look and it's a mess, only two staves, missing drumset (or worse, drumset into the parts with tuned instrument notation), and we could go on and on! But don't worry about it. IF you're interested, you may learn bit by bit, sooner or later. Imho score engraving is something interesting and worth learning. Music theory of any kind is as well, but you probably know that and I don't wanna be that guy!

Now, the piece itself after 2-3 listenings seems a bit over the place to me. The arpeggio-motif is almost always present as some kind of glue but following that metaphor I think there's an excess of glue on the whole theme. It's like when you add so much ketchup to the burger that the burger ends up becoming ketchup, but with some meat. Combine that with the, again, lack of dynamics aside of "volume dynamics" (in terms of number of instruments) and prolly automatic sound normalisation and you get something with lots of room for improvement. It has potential, yes; the part in which you get the drumset going is awesome, and I would have liked more of that. But I believe it's raw and unpolished in terms of sound, but also in terms of structure.

The beginning is also good. The ending, though, did not convince me at all. The halloween-ish sound, well you did include harpsichord and organ, but it sounds to me more like the tune for the local boss of this region (beta version), which isn't bad either, at least in my opinion.

Thank you for submitting your piece and for participating in this little cozy informal contest :). 

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ø.

@therealAJGS

I would not mind helping you in making sure you score that looks pretty and such. Also, a great book is Behind bars. 🙂