October 27, 2025Oct 27 I dug through my old musecore files, and found what I think to be my first composition, from four months ago Op. 1, No. 1 – Miniature in D♯ Major.mp3 Op. 1No. 1 – Miniature in D♯ Major.pdf
October 28, 2025Oct 28 Hi @Tunndy! I think the piece is in Gb major rather than D# major! D# major doesn't really exist as a key signature as it would have contained 8 sharps with F double sharp! A funny waltz with the running notes figure, and you can definitely extend both ideas! Henry
October 28, 2025Oct 28 @Tunndy what great start to piano writing. Below, you will find feeback, and I hope helps. Harmony: You've piece in Gb flat major, which is probably a hard key to read (especially if you have double sharps and flats). I feel if you transpose it G to F it would make easier for young musicians to read. (Think about that). The harmony is entirely diatonic: I, IV, and V. It would be easier to read if we had waltz pattern was in the bass and melody in treble. Melody and motives: The motive of chords is nice book end that begin and ends piece. The middle, however, needs a melody. Something that says: Hey this new! Form: As a short piece, it is well done. Over all: there are things to improve upon. I feel that is composition has room improvement. Maybe you have understand core ideas, slowly move to advance ones.
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