piano A short piano piece

Hello everyone! 

I know it has been a while since I have upload a piece of music. That's because I went to balance uploads with reviewing, and sometimes I might be busy with my own compositions.  

This piece I am sharing with you is a solo piece for piano. 

Here is my goals this piece: 

1. A short piece no more than 1-2 minutes. 

2.  I want to a write a piece a minor; however, you do not hear tonic. 

3.  It uses dissonance to establish dark, foreboding mood

4. You may think...Mussorgsky?  Maybe? 

5. Uses a short motive through out the piece to create variations. 

I can not think anything. 

Let me know what you think.  I used to Audacity to render the wav to a mp3.