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it's been a while since I posted here, here's my attempt at covering Bohemian Rhapsody 😁

 

Bohemian_Rhapsody orchestra.pdf

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Hi Tunndy,

I notice your glissando lines have gone a bit haywire in Bars 54-55.

Also in Bars 23 and 41 Violin II, you should flip the direction of the note stalks to make it clear what's going on there.

Same in Bar 61 Violin I.

Bar 55: some rests need deleting in the harp and Violin I. 
Same in Bar 66 Bass Drum, and Bar 69 various instruments.

Plus a few more places where you have unnecessary rests.

Bar 74: voices need tidying.

Other than that good job!

Also liked your recent Liszt orchestration of "La Campanella".

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