Tuesday at 06:17 PM3 days I tried to make this as solemn and expressive as possible.This was made using musescorehere is the pdf.here is the linkI hope you enjoy!sunset-suite-in-c-minor-musicbro456.custom_score.mp3 Edited Tuesday at 06:27 PM3 days by Musicman_3254
Tuesday at 06:25 PM3 days Author Ok, you should try it now Edited Tuesday at 06:32 PM3 days by Musicman_3254
Tuesday at 07:36 PM3 days Entry: Sunset Suite Melodies Themes MotivesHarmony Chords TexturesForm Development Structure TimeOriginality CreativityScore PresentationInstrumentation Orchestration PlayabilityExecution of Given ChallengeTaste44375486Average Score:5Review:Score presentation: While this score is present in a clean manner, there are technical issues that are connected to idomatic writing for strings (I will address this next). First let us address the over score. Idiomatic writing; There is a lot of ground to cover. 1) The 8va and 8sub above and below the string parts are not idiomatic writing. You would see that keyboard works. 2)rolled chords are not possible in string writing. If there is triple or quadle stop that is used marked by pizz or is rolled. Hower, the triple stop you wrote is not playable. 3) Harmonics are wonderful. They are used those notes outside the natural range of parts. When is there is divi, the voices are not clear. Form: There is no clear with this piece. It seems to be continuous melody. It is not rather if there are sections or not.Creativity/Originality: Yes, this is original and creative piece. Harmony, texture, chords: The over texture is monophonic. There is no sense of harmonic motion. Theme, melody, motive: The melody is way to repetive. Taste: It is relaxing to hear something like something once a while. I want to see this member grow his craft. Mimalism music is hard to write. Raise to challenge!
13 hours ago13 hr This is actually quite beautiful. Reminds me of ambient video game music - running through the valleys of Cyrodil slaying goblins and fighting back the hordes of the overlord.
13 hours ago13 hr Author Just now, Markus Boyd said:This is actually quite beautiful.Reminds me of ambient video game music - running through the valleys of Cyrodil slaying goblins and fighting back the hordes of the overlord.Thank you.
53 minutes ago53 min Hi @Musicman_3254 !First, one thing for the scoring: as this competition signifies On 4/1/2026 at 1:50 PM, PeterthePapercomPoser said:You may use any combination of 3 - 5 monophonic or polyphonic instruments/voices.It would not be appropriate to use divisi for the strings, unless it's for a string orchestra. The soundtrack and the scoring suggests that this piece is for a string orchestra rather than a string quintet, which could have been resulted in disqualification. The octaves sign aren sometimes not realized in the recording, and you should write the notes out instead of using the sign anyways, like those in the beginning section. But put that scoring aside, I quite enjoy your music here! I like how you achieve some varieties with a simple unchanging melody by changing the instrument to play the melody, the register, the thickness/thinness of accompaniment, I especially like the moment when you invite motions of semiquavers in b.50 which really makes the music more exciting. Use of tremolos are great too to enhance the drama. Maybe one suggestion is that you can vary more with keys and mood. The piece is in C minor with the same melody throughout the whole piece which is fine for me, but it will be more interesting if you can somewhat modulate to other keys. For example even with the original melody you could have a Eb major chord supporting it and make the mood change.Thx for sharing!Henry
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