Valse Indeciso

Hay guys,

I am back with a new piece!

Ok, so here's the scoop. I have been working on a piece for my composition teacher and I want it to be listened to before I turn it in for a grade. Will you listen and tell me what I could do to improve it.

It is in ABA'Coda.

Have Fun!

Nice piece. I like the way you have contrasted the left hand parts in the piano, but sometimes I find it a bit too contrasting as it changes a bit quick.

Overall a fairly solid piece, good work.

Thanks... I haven't seen you around much.. are you new?

Whew! Nice piece for my ears, though for my way of thinking about composition, it is not.

What you have here is not a vals, but more of an

It is a short composition for my teacher. Maybe I might extend it and post another version of it.

Thanks.

Thanks... I haven't seen you around much.. are you new?

I signed up here a while ago but forgot about this place. I've just rediscovered it :cool:

Oh, ok!

Can't say I can offer you much structural critisicm, A) because my theory knowledge is probably much worse than yours and B) because I thought it was excellent! (from a listeners view)

You seem to have quite a 'witty' writing style and it held my attenion all the way through. Perhaps a little short but you explained about that already.

nice work indeedy

Thanks!

:) very delightful! one thing i would fix: the first bars with that awkward 'oom-pa-pa' rhythm :D . just add some ornamentation or flexibility and pay attention to the chords you have used, they seem hard - for the rest is a real pleasure. :D

A lot of my chosrds seem hard. It is mainly a style I like to have because when I play on the piano, I can't play left hand chords very well... so I always have to practice that so I incorporate them a lot into my pieces.