I've fixed a ton of notes, but the sound still feels off.

I've fixed a ton of notes, but the sound still feels off. Can someone help me figure out if there are still problems with the notes themselves… or if the rest is a MIDI issue? ㅠㅠ

Edited Friday at 02:01 PM2 days by Scriabinian

Hello

I’d like to comment on the first piece.

I think it’s a very interesting, beautiful and original work.

The impression I get is that in some parts it’s as if you had two separate works (the choir and the string quartet). In the first section (which is then repeated), some of the lines played by first and second violins become very active and chromatic, and either get a bit lost, or I don’t feel they quite fit together. I think section B is more balanced in that respect, as the strings tend to underline or accentuate the melody more.