I've fixed a ton of notes, but the sound still feels off.

I've fixed a ton of notes, but the sound still feels off. Can someone help me figure out if there are still problems with the notes themselves… or if the rest is a MIDI issue? ㅠㅠ

Edited Friday at 02:01 PM2 days by Scriabinian

Hello

I’d like to comment on the first piece.

I think it’s a very interesting, beautiful and original work.

The impression I get is that in some parts it’s as if you had two separate works (the choir and the string quartet). In the first section (which is then repeated), some of the lines played by first and second violins become very active and chromatic, and either get a bit lost, or I don’t feel they quite fit together. I think section B is more balanced in that respect, as the strings tend to underline or accentuate the melody more.

3 hours ago, Luis Hernández said:

안녕하세요

첫 번째 글에 대해 한마디 하고 싶습니다.

저는 이 작품이 매우 흥미롭고 아름답고 독창적이라고 생각합니다.

어떤 부분에서는 마치 두 개의 별개의 작품(합창단과 현악 4중주)이 있는 것처럼 느껴집니다. 첫 번째 구간(그 후 반복됨)에서는 제1과 제2바이올린이 연주하는 일부 선율이 매우 활발하고 반음계가 되어, 다소 흐려지거나 완전히 맞지 않는 느낌이 듭니다. B구간이 그 점에서 더 균형 잡힌 편이라고 생각해요. 현악기가 멜로디를 더 강조하거나 강조하는 경향이 있기 때문입니다.

Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback. It was incredibly helpful.