"June, 1944" for Brass Band (WIP for Tampa Bay Call for Scores)

So.. I am currently working on a second submission for another call for scores (2/2 now. Submitted one for another competition last week). I would appreciate some feedback on the current progress of this score as it is. I'm looking for answers for:

1. Voice leading; have I been effective with creating smooth transitions between the chords, and leading tones into the different sections? If not, where could I improve this?

2. Form; is the form, starting points & destinations easily distinguishable, enjoyable to follow and effective in the narration of the depicted theme?

3. How could I better write for texture, at and beyond the C rehearsal marking?

The score is a tribute and homage to the lives lost during the allied offensive in Germany, kicking off on D-Day in June of 1944. You'll see my call-back to Taps, in a variable manner, near the end of my current stopping point. Enjoy listening & reading along, and I look forward to the feedback I may receive :)

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