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Hello, I just ran across this forum yesterday and I thought I'd share some of my work. This is a short song (~1:40), but I'm fond of it. Does anyone think it should be longer? Maybe give some of its themes a second treatment? I'm anxious for any other comments too, of course.

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Hey paul!

I don't know much about the kind of music you write, but i must say i'm enjoying it very much. A neat idea, and melodies flow nicely! I wouldn't know to tell you how to continue... it is very short, but a neat piece. Sound good when played in a loop!

Keep composing!

hi!

umm... i listened to it... i didn't really like it.... but thats jst me....i dont really see what ur tryin to depict here...

but yeh, as wolf 88 says... its more suited as a loop.

liked the ending tho.

but im no expert

I find as my songs are normally stories.

I cant really picture a story inthe song and its a bit unstructured. To make it longer more hooks and repatative melodies would have to be introduced to sturcture it up

I love the bass sounding section around the 50second mark

keep up the good work :D