Cafe Gardenne:

Not the direction I wanted it to go, I was kind of hoping for more of the sound I got from the beginning, but I don't really feel like going back now . . .

Oh and ignore the annoying Leo, I hope it doesn't get on your nerves.. if I take it out, it ruins the beginning, but if I keep it in it ruins the second half. I care more about the beginning.

I lost track with my whole idea in the beginning since I was so afraid I wasn't going to create a varied harmonic structure that I wound up going with the opposite extreme.

Also, tell me what you think of my short arrangement of Kaleidoscope of the Mind.

The new URL is here:

Fantasy

I just changed it around a lot and added the Bosendorfer sound.

Also, take a look at this neat little thing I put together in a minute:

Fun

I implore you to encode your recordings to MP3 before you share them with others. I haven't the bandwidth to stream WAV files, see.

An application such as CDex would suffice.

Here you go:

Cafe

Funny Clip

Cafe:

Nice melody, it flows and makes sense. I hear some elements of jazz and pop in here, as well as of mozart. i think this could fit in great to some movie background music. perhaps to continue you can repeat, then create a counter melody in the tonic (or even in the minor tonic). there are really countless ways to continue. but it seems like this piece can end up a rather short piece, 4-5 minutes long, unless you intend completely different things.

a thing i find that works for me to continue a piece is to hear your piece played back, and when it stops, your brain (sometimes) will continue the piece, in some way that feels natural. take that idea, and use it.

funny clip: maybe for a kids toy commercial - theres not really much to comment on here.

fantasy wont load for me...

Thanks for the comments. Fantasy is Cafe only a better version and it loads for me.