REVIEWS NEEDED

I'm looking for some reviews on my composition currently have 16/30 a low

C grade

any comment would be grately apreciated

http://www.jukeboxalive.com/audio_play_offsite.php?mid=908196&skin=908182

Hmm. The rhythm is weird, and it sounds like the same few measures loop for 2 minutes, then just played scales. The background percussion never changed as well. It lacks in originality and direction. Try changing it up some and being a bit more creative with the theme. The chords were pretty good though. Keep composing. :laugh:

It's a good start. The progression is nice, and there's a solid base, but it certainly lacks any melodic energy. The time is weird - somehow you managed to get a midi to rush the 8th notes...

It's rough, but certainly something that could be refined into a great chart.

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i would suggest tightening up the playing, (you could probably change and remove a few of the notes) because it sounds very weird with that bossa nova beat you have going on there.